Monday, September 22, 2008

55 Word Short Story

To Fetch Water

“Why do we have to climb so far?”

“Stop complaining Jillian, we’re almost there.”

“It’s too steep Jackson, I can’t do it.”

“It’s just a hill, anyone can do it.”

Jackson slips and falls to the bottom of the hill. Jillian rolls her eyes and goes to get him.

Anyone?” smirks Jillian.


5 comments:

c_sarge said...

hahah thats funny :)

good idea!

d_rek said...

great use in changing another story to make it fit in your story love the idea

Pakou Lee said...

Funny! :P

i love candy! said...

great idea! :D

crystal said...

hahahaha nice twist on jack and jill lol (i like how you make her name 'jillian', cool original detail)